This is really just more a comment on the fact that I'm not really writing the child like a child. He's a kid, but I still write like I'm me. I could try to write it more "kid like", but I prefer not trying to force something like that.

Besides, the last time I wrote in an accent I made a joke about Henry the Eighth (the song) which no one got, so that's made me a little gun shy with you people.
2015-03-07 08:04:59 
Even in the Pokemon games the kids don't always really talk like 'kids', so I think you're good here.
2015-05-27 21:14:18 
In a lot of games with extremely young heroes most of the kids talk more adult like than several of the adults I've met.

When evil spreads across the land, and darkness rises and the monsters roam. When the creatures of the night make beautiful music, and the things that go bump in the night go bump with greater enthusiasm. When the world is in peril and is in need of a hero...

These guys are, sadly, the best the world can hope for. These are the adventures of the heroes of CVRPG. They mean well, they try hard, and occasionally they do the impossible...

They actually do something heroic.